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So, I'm finished with my first ever paid commission! Thanks to dinobert06 (:icondinobert06:) for commissioning me! It means a lot ^^ She wanted a picture of Aang in the Avatar State to put on a T-Shirt, and let me tell you this is one sight I would not want to encounter in a dark alley. Ass-kicking Avatar. xD
I'm pretty happy with the way this turned out, honestly. Aang looks good! And I got to practice my element CGing x) It was pretty difficult seeing as there are pretty much NO tutorials on how to CG elements in a simplistic anime/cartoon manner, only the realistic kind, and that was just not going to look right if Aang was cel-shaded. So I had to figure it out all on my own x) I think I did pretty well. :3

I don't really have anything else to say, really, so that's it. As always, any constructive criticism is welcome, and enjoy!

:iconrudeboyskunkplz::iconrudeboyskunkplz2::iconrudeboyskunkplz3: but please :iconcommentplz:

Edit: Tweaked his legs to hopefully look more foreshortened so it's easier to tell that both are bent, and added highlights from the fire.

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:iconmissflight:
Woah!
How could I have missed this piece of awesomeness? Dx Like, where have I been? X.x
I really like your take of the Avatar State. Now we can get a better, clearer view of him. ;D xD And instead of it swirling around him everywhere, he can concentrate the elements water and fire with seperate hands- I bet that makes fighting easier. :D Well, it seems like it would in my head anyway. :p
Overall, nicely done! ^^
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~sweetangel1927 Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahaha thank you! ^^
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~retrogal23 Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wicked!
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~sweetangel1927 Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ^^
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~the0real0katara Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He does look older here. :D My suggestion is to maybe add a bit of lighting in the robes where it is close the fire. Like a hard stroke of lighter color. Humm, I don't know how to explain, hehe. And what it looks weird a bit to me is the water. It looks a bit stiff even if it is going around his arm. And, aah! sorry, i just noticed too. His right leg is bend a bit so I think it should look a little bit shorter than the other one, although I'm not sure about that. :XD:

it's a cooool pic. I would like to see an epic background though!!
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~sweetangel1927 Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh, I was trying to do that lighting thing that you mentioned, but on the water instead, but it was not coming out right so I kind of just dropped the idea and applied gradients to everything instead. But I didn't try it on his clothes or face, so I think I'll give it a shot. Only thing is I don't want it to look /too/ hard, you know? Because like if it isn't that strong of a light source, the edges should naturally be softer, right? That's what I did the gradient for. But you're right, it could use a little bit of extra since it is a fire after all, so I'll give it a shot. :meow:
As far as the water... lol. Well I guess I tried, and it didn't really turn out as well as I hoped xD I guess I'll have to practice water a lot more, then.
Other people have actually mentioned that about his legs. Both of his legs are actually supposed to be bent, that's why they're the same length. His left leg is just harder to tell because it's foreshortened (or supposed to be... xD) and he's wearing loose clothes. I think the main problem is just with the positioning of his legs altogether, but I'll see if I can't make his leg look a bit more foreshortened. ^^

And lol yea, you're right, I'd like to see an epic background too but the commissioner only paid for a plain one, and besides the picture was going on a shirt so a background might have been kind of lost. I also have no idea what background I'd do for it. Lol.

Thank you for the detailed comment, though! I'm glad you like it ^^
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~the0real0katara Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it looks better now! I really like how the lighting on the clothes look. :D Yeah, lol, water is haaard. >o<
You're very welcome. :)
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:icondinobert06:
Haha, just thought I'd comment and say how awesome it looks! I love how Aang looks older, it seems very realistic! You did a really good job ^^.
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~sweetangel1927 Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! :]
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